Greetings,
I've recently decided to get away from micro-blogging on bdsmlr so I can devote my more-limited time to longer stories. I've got a few projects I'm working on now, but I'd love to know what folks would like to see in the future. What kind of Brentwood-related or Sue Sharp/Button/ComPet-related stories would be interesting?
-BW
Hello here is the Random Anon form First Kennel Part 2 again,
ReplyDeleteFirstly does this mean you'll stop Posting on BDSMLR entirely? Or just more rarely? While i do enjoy your longer stories more, BDSMLR still had some fun little nuggets.
On to the actual question:
Honestly more from everything would be ideal.
I really enjoyed Roadtrip, From Claire to Pipsqueak, Goodbye Lori, Morning Routine and last but not least First Kennel.
Your stories and Nimbletails Art really showed to me that Petplay isn't solely some weird Furry Fetish and has tons of exploration Potential. So any exploration of the submission and love the more honest simplicity of a Pet is golden as far as i am concerned. Maybe more POV from the Masters Side?
My personal interests also go into the more extreme Aspects like Amputation and Voice Alteration. Maybe its because one of the first Erotic Images i ever watched a few decades ago was one of a woman with Doggy Prosthetics, but that shit is sadly too rare and i fell like the Permanence of it makes it fell less rapey (i know logic has left my brain long ago).
So i really like your Brentwoods Alteration more than Nimbletails more Gear related Stuff. Button is still adorable of course and maybe even works better with the non-permanence in her early stages.
The only things i really don't like is stuff like Vore, Guro and various Bodily Excretions like Urin, Blood etc., but since you IIRC never included them this feels kinda redundant.
The only real Complaint i have with have your Stories is that there sometimes is Buildup and no finisher, it kinda feels like i get literary edged and no satisfying conclusion.
Like From Claire to Pipsqueak for example, the actual story especially the interaction with that Dude she knew before she got turned was excellent, but than at the End you leave it up to the Readers Imagination.
I read your stories because i want to read and know YOUR ideas and interpretation. I can always create my own Headcanon, but i am really interested i yours.
This also includes Climaxes, i kinda feel weird asking this because it feels like i only want Porn, but while Buildup is really nice and important (Morning Routine Part 1 for example was excellent) Part 3 s (Morning Routine, First Kennel) really round things off and make it seem like a finished Story (which is my one Point of Complaint with Roadtrip, did she actually mange to hold it in and get her Reward? etc.?), like small stories are fine, well and good and i don't expect you to do anything especially write Novels or something, but just like a Point is satisfying at the End of a Sentence so is a Story without an Open End
:)
Welcome back, Anon! :)
DeleteI can’t speak for the future, but for now, due to time constraints, yes, I’m done with the microblogging.
I agree that there is a lot of potential to expand on those stories in the form of additional chapters or sequels. If you like POV from the master’s side, you might enjoy the 4th Sue Sharp story “Tit for Tat,” if you haven’t already read it. I would certainly be open to doing more from Robert’s perspective or from the perspective of other owners/masters.
As for the more extreme stuff, you might enjoy “Megan’s Sentence” if you haven’t already read that one. I’m also in the process of working with another writer on his setting which has some more-extreme aspects amidst a very prim and proper Victorian-like society.
I do have a tendency to leave things open at the end of my stories. I guess if I had a particular style such endings would be a part of it. I think that’s largely a product of spending so much time microblogging and focusing on a particular moment rather than a resolution. It’s definitely something I’ve been thinking about as a transition into focusing entirely on longer projects.
Thanks for the feedback and feel free to share additional thoughts in the future. They’re always welcome!
-BW
Hello again, :)
Deletethanks for your swift and comprehensive answer.
I have outside of your myriad Blogposts on BDSMLR read as far as i am aware every single story from you except Part 1, 2, 3 and 4 of Sue Sharps Main Story. I was kinda waiting for more and then binging them all at once.
So Megan's Sentence sadly isn't really my Cup of Tea Nimbletails Character Pepper from the Experimental Divison is pretty much my strike Zone in terms of extreme and Pigs are one of the few non-sexy Petplay Pets.
As for Story ideas:
1. A story where a Brentwood Wife gets ordered by her Husband to "Pet Play" and does too well so he makes it permanent. Maybe even with the extra addition that she is so devoted that she doesn't realize that this is no longer playing for a few days but permanent and that the maid has now become the Wife? The last part probably only works under the assumption that she is being house-trained and not send off to a training center.
2. A Story where a Dominatrix also gets reeducated into a Pet maybe even with the ones she herself trained for their Master and ultimately end up being as the lowest on the hierarchy as a side result of training the others and maybe even because she is being trained by a Man :).
3. Just a day in the life of a Brentwood Wife, maybe even a continuation of that one Wedding Story you posted on literotica, but later in her life when she isn't so shy anymore.
4. Anything like Goodbye Lori Part 1, i felt kinda dissapointed that there was a 6 months jump, but essentially a day in the life of a Brentwood Petgirl.
Thanky you for writing all you works and i am looking forward for more.
-RandomAnon5274324
Those are some great ideas, especially the second one! I will definitely keep them in mind moving forward!
DeletePodría hacer una historia en la que Button y Robert se encuentran con el señor Richter del primer caso de Sue sharp
ReplyDeleteI definitely wanted Richter to make another appearance. I actually included him at the beginning of the 6th story (I have not finished it yet). What would you like to see happen if Richter appeared again?
DeleteGoogle translate (Lo siento. No sé español muy bien.)
Definitivamente quería que Richter hiciera otra aparición. De hecho, lo incluí al comienzo de la sexta historia (aún no la he terminado). ¿Qué le gustaría que sucediera si Richter volviera a aparecer?
Que invite a button y robert a su mansión para una sesión de juegos con Boji.
DeleteY que al final Richter les regale algo pequeño como un nuevo traje para button o algo mas grande como una mansión identica a la que el tiene.
Yo no se mucho de ingles pero logro entender tus historias gracias al traductor, asi que no te preocupes por lo del español.
It occurred to me that Richter could have Boji try the POOCHow enema from the Nimbletail stories
DeleteForgive the lateness of this reply. That's not a bad idea. I don't usually delve into things like scat, but at the very least it could be referenced.
DeleteWhatever happened to Cynthia's Wedding Night? That would make for a good sequel.
ReplyDeleteCoincidentally, I I just posted a kind of loose sequel to that story moments ago!
DeleteThanks the heads up, just read it yesterday. Very good! Great to see you picking up with those characters again. Maybe next time is about William's efforts to Cynthia pregnant? I'm sure he would want lots of sons and be dead set against birth control. Or maybe he fucks her in the ass every now and then to put for the sheer domination it brings? Keep writing!
DeleteGlad you liked it!
DeleteThat would certainly be on both William and Cynthia's minds, so perhaps I could make a story out of that.
As for the, uh, backdoor romance, it is widely known, but rarely discussed that such a style of lovemaking is the only reliable form of birth control available to the majority of the population in Brentwood. So, it could be something that happens in the future, depending on how serious William is about starting a family, of course.
Good point, Brentwood would not allow birth control anyways. Maybe next time shows William getting to work in knocking up Cynthia? Surely he would love a big brood of children and like all well-behaved Brentwood girls Cynthia would be overjoyed to give him what he wants! Then between pregnancies he takes her by the backdoor and mouth more often to space put her pregnancies. He's a caring responsible husband after all.
DeleteIndeed! Citizens of Brentwood are all taught to be responsible with their little wives. ;)
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Journalist Undercover - A female journalist has just been laid off and doesn't know if she can still make a living as a writer. Broke and desperate, she receives tips about a recent series of disappearances of young women around her community. She starts doing some digging and discovers that it's not just where she lives, but that reports of women going missing are occurring all across the country. She manages to get one of her confidential sources to provide her with the name "Brentwood" as a clue, but that source is suddenly silenced. She manages to get herself "imported" into Brentwood and goes undercover to find out the truth about this mysterious town, believing that she can write a book about this investigation and become famous. Her quest takes her from the most elite corners of Brentwood to its darkest and most depraved areas, as she gathers information and fends off dangers and threats, and tries to avoid being captured. Just when she is about to conclude her investigation and send in her report to be published on a major news site, she gets found out and is brought to justice by Brentwood authorities, who make an example out of her.
ReplyDeleteCelebrities in Brentwood - A pop star/actress finds that her career is in the toilet. Her latest album sales and movies are failing, none of the brands want her to advertise for them anymore, and she's being forgotten by the public. Worst of all, she's just caught her boyfriend being unfaithful to her, and he dumps her. Out of the blue, she receives an offer from a mysterious organization to star in a movie for a company she's never heard of called Brentwood Studios. In spite of her reservations, she agrees, because the money being offered is more than she's earned in a long time, and because she has no other projects coming to her. She and a number of other female celebrities who are down on their luck find themselves whisked away to the Brentwood Society, a place they have no idea ever existed. There, the girls find out that the "jobs" they were promised are way spicier than any movie or show they've ever done before, and that the casting couch is a very real thing in Brentwood. They've been paid by Brentwood citizens to come to Brentwood and do all sorts of things for money that they never would've agreed to in a million years, but as they are all desperate, they have no choice but to obey to whatever their fans demand of them.
ReplyDeleteExplorers Stumbling into Brentwood - A plane suddenly crashes without warning in the vicinity of Brentwood, landing in remote wilderness. The people on board, a man and a woman, miraculously survive with minor injuries and are immediately apprehended by Brentwood authorities. The community leaders must decide what to do with the new arrivals. The story follows their rapidly diverging experiences in Brentwood and their subsequent introduction and indoctrination into Brentwood values. The man, as a consequence of his male privilege, is interrogated and mistrusted at first and viewed as a potential spy by citizens, but upon questioning is revealed to be harmless and is given the opportunity to join the community, on the condition that he never leave and that he must abandon his family and his life in the outside world. He at first resists the community, but comes to agree with male supremacy and successfully becomes a citizen, obtaining a wife and home of his own. The female, on the other hand, immediately tries to fight back and escape, and tries to encourage other females to join her, but to no avail. She gets cycled through a number of female institutions, such as the Thompson School, the Merry Maids, and Happy Paws, all of which she refuses to submit to. Seeing that she is incapable of being reformed, she gets assigned to her new role as livestock and a breeding animal.
Inheritance - An ordinary young man who doesn't have much in the way of money, or looks, or smarts, and is completely average in everything is dumbfounded when he gets approached by lawyers claiming to represent a very distant relative of his who has just died and bequeathed everything to him. He now finds himself the owner of extensive properties, businesses, and land. The catch is that all of it is located in the Brentwood Society, which he has never even heard of. He gets introduced to the community and its values, and has to decide if he wants to stay and leave his old life behind, or give up this opportunity to become a citizen. He must convince the citizens to accept him, as they rightfully view him as an interloper who doesn't yet accept their beliefs. He also finds himself inheriting an entire stable of maids, pet girls, and livestock, and now has authority over the females in the family, and must decide whether to keep or sell them.